The Great Earth City
Part 2
By Hunter Jackson
Six earth bending soldiers came to tell the dragon to stop drinking all the water.
The dragon said “Ha, ha, ha, you cannot stop me.”
Then the earth bending soldier bent rocks to become the earth and fired the earth at the dragon, but the dragon was very strong, it caused damage but not a lot. Mean while the earth bending soldiers needed to team with Avatar.
Then the dragon learning the power of changing colors became an ultra dragon that no one can see.
The earth bending soldiers and Avatar could not see the dragon. Then the soldiers spread their positions out to north, south, east and west while the Avatar stayed in the middle. Then they all could see the dragon from different positions.
The dragon drank too much water. The water exploded out of his body creating a loud sound, BOOM BOOM BOOM! The dragon’s body blew into pieces and the water went right back into the lake.
The earth bending soldiers and Avatar felt sorry for the dragon. Then they put their powers together and brought the dragon back to life again.
The dragon felt bad that he drank all the water. So he said “I will not drink all the water again. I will be a good dragon.” Then he flew away with sadness.
The earth bending soldiers and Avatar felt sorry for dragon having to be by himself with no friends. Then they said “Please come stay with us.”
“No thanks. I behaved badly”, the dragon said.
To be continued ………………………………..
By Hunter Jackson, Saturday, December 8, 2012
Hunter came to visit me and he drew the picture for part 2 of his story, “The Great Earth City”. After he finished he told me his story for part 2.
One time I suggested that the dragon could hide from the earth bending soldiers and the Avatar by becoming camouflaged just like camellias.
Hunter wanted the dragon to die after he blew up. I said if you let the dragon die then he cannot be in your story anymore. You will lose one of your characters. How about letting the earth bending soldiers and the Avatar use their magic to help the dragon?
Almost the end of the story hunter said the dragon flew away. I suggested that if he went away he might be lonely and have no friends. How about letting the earth bending soldiers and the Avatar ask him to stay with them? I want Hunter to think about kindness to others.
As he tried to continue his story after he decided that the dragon did not want to stay with the earth bending soldiers and the Avatar. Then he said “How about to be continued.”
I said OK, you will tell me the story for part 3 next time.
Great thanks to John for helping to construct the proper sentences and vocabulary.
Ing-On Vibulbhan-Watts, Saturday, December 22, 2012